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my girl's day [tri-ku] (Haiku) by lmp

morning sunbeams catch fairies dancing in the air; my girl claps with glee. golden curls bouncing, her shadow shortens, she runs, her laughter fluid. quiet face looks up to moonlight and stars above. she whispers goodnight.

Dovina 6-Mar-06/12:48 PM
Some good thoughts here, but they seem forced into a haiku-mold.




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