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Spring Rolls (Free verse) by Ranger

Spring rolls in, served on the new year's platter Wrapped in a pastry of sunshine and rain Containing a multitude of colours Strands of flowers And biting cold Takes a mouthful To savour the spicy aftertaste Of summer

LilMsLadyPoet 3-Mar-06/8:21 AM
'of sunshine and rain
Containing a multitude of colours
Strands of flowers'
That's good.

To savour the spicy aftertaste
Of summer
And, that's good.




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