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isomers (Free verse) by skaskowski

lost inside a solid stone, the wall around an aqua-dome. my opinion: undeterred and my decisions: unobserved. make the same mistake twice just for the hell of it. what's a reminder without parallel scars?

Dovina 2-Mar-06/3:59 PM
The last verse is a heart-felt prayer of metaphoric rockheadedness, offered in contrition and deep appreciation for a Creator of stones and brains in parallel. The others commenting here should be ashamed of themselves for missing it.




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