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beauty (Senryu) by Adriaan

dancing fireflies: cast out of a speeding car, cigarette explodes

Ranger 1-Mar-06/9:36 AM
Fireflies-cigarette, fantastic analogy.
I really do like your haikus (senryus, whichever is appropriate.)




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