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isomers
(
Free verse
) by
skaskowski
lost inside a solid stone, the wall around an aqua-dome. my opinion: undeterred and my decisions: unobserved. make the same mistake twice just for the hell of it. what's a reminder without parallel scars?
Ranger
1-Mar-06/9:08 AM
I'd prefer to see stanza 2 keep a constant rhythm with stanza 1. I do like the idea of this, though.
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