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ReplyTo a comment on On Looking Back by Dovina.

Dovina24 Feb 2006

Yes, it was painful. You see, I only wanted iambic rhythm, nothing fancy. Let me count it for you:

I ONCE had a FRIEND in BLACK,
Who FELT a TWINGE in his BACK.
With BLOOD on my KNIFE,
He FLED for his LIFE,
So we NEVer quite GOT in the SACK.