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Revised Dream (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

Facing the unknown without fear, without knowledge or compromise. With the world by my side full of faith and confidence. Staring at the sun and never going blind. It’s been beat to a pulp scared up and overlooked. But I’ve always seen it as a sturdy rock to stand. See me as a fool but I'll always believe. Another day’s gone by. One more forgotten dream but this one's never lost. Take it to heart or ignore it but know in every way that this is a dream for all.

Ranger 24-Feb-06/10:20 AM
Ah, I also see that you're struggling for comments on your poems; my advice (as always) is to give other people feedback first, otherwise they're going to be less inclined to comment on your works. Give and take, and all that jazz.
I'll vote on this when it's nearer completion.




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