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Revised Dream (Final Version) (Free verse) by Wakeboarder20

Facing the unknown without fear, without knowledge or compromise. With the world by my side full of faith and confidence. Staring at the sun and never going blind. It’s been beat to a pulp scared up and overlooked. But I’ve always seen it as a sturdy rock to stand. See me as a fool but I'll always believe. Another day’s gone by. One more forgotten dream but this one's never lost. Take it to heart or ignore it but know in every way that this is a dream for all.

Wakeboarder20 24-Feb-06/10:06 AM
I've revised it some. I doubt this will be my final revision because this is about my tenth revision so far. I would just like to know if you feel I'm going in the right direction. Thank you.




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