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Iron Sky (Triolet) by MacFrantic

She adopted manners of a sort Rough, unpolished worship of the soil Pollack praise her colorful retort She adopted manners of a sort Cursed the iron skies before the court Relieved us of the burden of her foil She adopted manners of a sort Rough, unpolished worship of the soil

MacFrantic 23-Feb-06/1:42 PM
Actually, I was refering to satirist Neal Pollack. The lack of commas is intentional. Also, "burden of her foil" is taken in a figurative sense, hence her cursing the sky.




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