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lost souls (Free verse) by aamir_trichy

The fire is burning them all They know not, Cause the fire is cold, Tis not burning with flames, Tis not leaving smoke, For its inside them that consumes the soul.

zodiac 21-Feb-06/3:22 PM
Not bad, but you should know most poetry written in English is not like this.




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