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ReplyTo a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina.

Dovina20 Feb 2006

The meaning I intended is the name of the white clothes worn by people who play bowls. “Lily-whites” is not the technical name, but a name (noun) that I chose (invented if you wish) with mild sarcastic intent. “Lily-white” is usually used as an adjective, so I can see how using it as a noun might confuse you; but “lily-whites” could hardly be an adjective. The punctuation, which you have added, does add clarity, but I find the sentence perfectly clear without it, assuming the reader knows what bowls is.