poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on A young Man’s Demise by Dovina.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.19 Feb 2006

'All they have is a squashed black egg which they stand around in lily-whites and tell each other how genteel they are.'

That sentence is unparsable. Try using some punctuation. Here's what I think you meant to say, but it's just a guess because the original was so garbled-beyond-belief.

'All they have is a squashed black egg. They stand around it, in a lily-white circle, telling each other how genteel they are.'