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Mentally Disabled (Free verse) by drnick

Analog to digital will you bring me my pipe? Slithering on the surface of what seems to be right Shadows sneak like serpents in barbarian's babble Now you find the truth you took soon to be unraveled Sniper sights hit teddy bears resulting snowy scene Anybody have a clue of what this all could mean? Diaphragms and diapers find their way into the trash The world is getting acne according to recent photographs My baby battled blisters and popped each every one Its time for trees and turtles to inherit trust funds You know not where I'm going no idea of where she's been Traveled thru a maze and found I started at the end.

Ranger 16-Feb-06/3:50 AM
Nonsense poems are the greatest. Just change 'thru' to 'through', because this is easily a nine!




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