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change (3rd draft) (Haiku) by Adriaan

Hermit sits: same place, but new view. Red leaves fall.

Adriaan 15-Feb-06/8:03 AM
Thanks for the comparison :) I am still leery of the word 'but' - it seems that I could use the sylabble to better effect. Any thoughts?




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