<~>9 Sep 2002

yes, laugh and crack are intentional repetitions. the second is an empathetic keening; does is make more sense as such, or still weak? you mean the comma by 'undone'? i think it has 2 meanings with the comma in and only one without it...yes. the 4th will be tightened, but this is less than 2 hours old now, so... thanks