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No One (Other) by sk8boardandpoems

Silence around me no one to tell, trapped in a box no one to help, Bleeding from my arm no one to care, Put in a cage no one to see, looked at by thousands no one to look back, Hair falling out no one to show, dying here slowly no one here to watch, lying on the ground no one to grab, pondering why im here no one to answer, crying here by myself no one to cry on, confused with my thoughts no one to know, Tangled with thoughs and questions no one to help, Confused and alone no one by me, No one around me no one to care no one here no one left no one to love no one to recieve love no one to ask no one to .......Answer

Glasseyez 9-Feb-06/8:54 PM
If you had something more than whining I would have given you a better score




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