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inadequate (Free verse) by skaskowski

let me know if you need dirt, i'll dig a hole. let me knew if your shirt is ripped, i'll learn to sew. but if you need a hand to pull you from the facts; let someone else know, i'm still learning to adapt.

Dovina 2-Feb-06/2:00 PM
Good up to the last line, which kills it.




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