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A Cleansing Of Creeds (Free verse) by Caducus

A lawn of ribs, Mortals dew. Eagles and vultures A new Eden. Leather mountains by ivory ponds Luger slings Goliath kills David. Blind Gods, all self proclaimed Heil Jesus Heil Hitler Heil rankless Jew. Man makes man Man made God Jews made money And paid well for it. New generation Nazis can we forget now? I cannot stomach Jew or German can we forgive now? Muslim butcher in Palestine can I call you David? Halal slaughtered Jews in Starbucks can I call you Mohammed? Let me name you as I see you "Brother" Do you see me now? I am flesh and blood truth and Braille, I laugh and cry like you yet different, I was born with faith bloodied from a womb like you and I will not live bloody I will die creedless Godless and pure.

Ranger 1-Feb-06/5:34 AM
Stanza 4 should, ironically, become the atheists' creed.




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