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Valentine?
(
Free verse
) by
celticskatermatt1
Candy, and roses We rub noses, Hearts are in the air Girls so fine and fair There is this special someone Who i love a ton. Girl every thing will work out fine Will you be my Valentine?
Ranger
1-Feb-06/5:31 AM
Oh, and take out the comma in line one.
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