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Valentine? (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Candy, and roses We rub noses, Hearts are in the air Girls so fine and fair There is this special someone Who i love a ton. Girl every thing will work out fine Will you be my Valentine?

Ranger 1-Feb-06/5:30 AM
The penultimate line is far too long given how quick the rest of the poem is, line 6 is a bit cheesy, other than that a very readable ditty.




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