LilMsLadyPoet31 Jan 2006

I know this is following a format, but the rythm is awkward, to me...and rythm is all-important to me. It just does not flow well, IMO.
notwithstanding> disregarding? in spite of? fighting against? If it is not withstanding change....I am not sure what that means right there, because you go on to say it is changed by winds of reason.