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Frozen Branches (Acrostic) by jmalone

Feathers and empty nests; realities of wintry seasons, on banks of desperate quests, still frozen for natural reasons. Trees and fallen leaves; omens of colder skies, next to longer sleeves, and truant solar rise. Branches and broken stalks; realities of arctic range, abounding treacherous walks, notwithstanding change, changed by winds of reason, harmonizing nature's season. © By jmalone

LilMsLadyPoet 31-Jan-06/9:55 AM
I know this is following a format, but the rythm is awkward, to me...and rythm is all-important to me. It just does not flow well, IMO.
notwithstanding> disregarding? in spite of? fighting against? If it is not withstanding change....I am not sure what that means right there, because you go on to say it is changed by winds of reason.




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