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untitled #2 (Lyric) by darby pyn

You wear your ego like a cape. a regal cloak a vane escape. you smile like a new disquise afraid to look me in the eyes. a stolen thought you made your own loss of skin only bone. concrete demeanor you exhale with every lie that you tell. solid body with no lucid vision suffocating in your decision. now your caught in plain sight slowly dying in the light. like a rose with too much sun petals wither an come undone. falling with no safety net a cold collision the final debt.

OneFingerAnswer 8-Sep-02/8:54 PM
Good job. (Check for typos though)




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