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Round 27 (Free verse) by Dovina

In a nation where war backfires and trust in naves erodes, a viral infection permeates the collective mind, emitting technological devices, erecting a paling of standard excuses.

Dovina 27-Jan-06/11:01 AM
It needs something to bookend too. I was playing with words on this one, not trying to be deep or meaningful, frivolous really, and the bad thing - erodite.

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