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Round 27 (Free verse) by Dovina

In a nation where war backfires and trust in naves erodes, a viral infection permeates the collective mind, emitting technological devices, erecting a paling of standard excuses.

ecargo 26-Jan-06/11:55 AM
Double meaning of "naves" here is clever. What do you mean by a "paling of standard excuses" (it's the "erecting a paling" that's throwing me off)? I don't get the title.




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