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I'm Sorry (Free verse) by PawnedTidal

I'm sorry I corrupted you With my imperfect existence. I'm sorry I complicated your life With my never-ending resistance. I'm sorry that I compared you To those from my past. I'm sorry I forgot to compare That those didn't last. I'm sorry I wasn't worth The tears you cried for me. I'm sorry for the pain I caused When I said it wasn't meant to be. I'm sorry I said good-bye, And turned your love away. I'm sorry it's taken me this long To realize I wanted you to stay.

Tarquin De La Bog 8-Sep-02/5:03 PM
With a little extra work you could have left me feelng utterly empty inside. 8. Short, concise and filled with startling strong sentences. The best poem I've read for a while. I commend you Sir.




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