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Tree of Life (Haiku) by ALChemy

A lone winter birch filled with leaves bright red. They sing, then fly to warm nests.

ALChemy 25-Jan-06/7:32 PM
Nope that's pretty much it. Just thought that was a neat image worth haikuing. Just the image of seeing a birch in winter that appears to be filled with pretty red leaves and then realizing they're a large flock of cardinals as they fly off. The image seems to lend itself to some symbolism the reader can make their own. I hope your not disappointed.




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