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Tree of Life (Haiku) by ALChemy

A lone winter birch filled with leaves bright red. They sing, then fly to warm nests.

ecargo 25-Jan-06/1:17 PM
haaa--whatta dope; see what happens when you (i.e., I) just respond all knee-jerk and whatnot? I've been spending a lot of time lately in these eastern woods; I sometimes forget there's a wider world out there.

Still not getting it though. Birds (like cardinals--such winter birds too) seems much too literal. Is your title a clue? If not, maybe it should be.




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