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Cold-Blooded Pillow (Free verse) by drnick

This whole life I've Been trained to leave you alive Yet tonight I feel Colder than sharpened steel You could end My keen Murderous motions in morphine Stare in my Irenic eyes For a moment we can improvise Light up this Candlewick garden That leaves killers for pardon Inevibility arrives I sigh An existential lullaby As we lay I dream Never to awake my criminal scheme Never to awake... when long overdue Never to awake... before you

drnick 21-Jan-06/12:20 PM
ya, you guys are taking it way too literally...but I'm sure that's my fault for writing it poorly.




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