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Cold-Blooded Pillow (Free verse) by drnick

This whole life I've Been trained to leave you alive Yet tonight I feel Colder than sharpened steel You could end My keen Murderous motions in morphine Stare in my Irenic eyes For a moment we can improvise Light up this Candlewick garden That leaves killers for pardon Inevibility arrives I sigh An existential lullaby As we lay I dream Never to awake my criminal scheme Never to awake... when long overdue Never to awake... before you

drnick 19-Jan-06/9:22 PM
This was called "Sleeping with the Enemy," however due to recent complaints I found that this was also the title to some piece of shit movie and thus could not use it. After hours upon hours of Trial and Error(also the title to a movie) I came up with this, I hope you like it.




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