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My Reason (Free verse) by PoeticXTC

I left you. I left him standing there Watching me Leave. I left him. I left you Wondering why. Why I left you standing in owe. Figure It Out! It's all a game A game I'm through Playing. I've grown up and through praying That you'd come to realize the distance is Killing me, Softly killing me, quietly killing my love for you. The passing time is colding my heart And my will to hold on. The thousand miles between us Has blinded you, And convinced me to Move on. This is my reason Why I left you. I left him Watching me leave.

zodiac 17-Jan-06/10:36 AM
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