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THE NIGHT STAGE (Acrostic) by anushree

The sun set slowly disappearing in the vast sky Heaven or hell it returned to I do not know why? Orange and yellowish hues taking away with it light Magnolias and roses barely visible in the black of night As lovers share their heart and soul and more Someone unlocks someone else's door! Men inebriated loose the gold that they bet Or get into brawls and return stinking of death Owls come out from their beds Raising mayhem with their nocturnal friends Every night the stage is set for them

amanda_dcosta 16-Jan-06/9:36 AM
Not quite specific and structured as your previous piece. Somehow the punch is missing.




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