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levity kiss (Free verse) by skaskowski

rules fall before, falling after, then after. what once was a frivolous kiss amidst the laughter. you commit-or you sin, singed with lipstick afire. one kiss marks the end. or you begin as a liar.

Dovina 13-Jan-06/12:49 PM
I'm glad you explained that. But why not just let the first line be: Leviticus, levity kiss.

"singed with lipstick" is good.




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