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The chestnut (Free verse) by richa

Dates have become altered or places. I am drunk on absinth under the chestnut and the girl is not legal to join me. It would drive me out but I have always picked conkers on the lush grass under the chestnut and I would wager there are no men who would be happier than I under the chestnut tree with a flagon full of my favourite liquor when dates become altered or places. And the girl carrying water is not legal to join me.

http://mulberryfairy 10-Jan-06/8:30 PM
"Dates have become misaligned
or places"
I didn't get the "or places"
The rest is great.





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