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the light of a truly bright day
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) by
digipoet
misplaced desire revealed dangerous impulse tempered arsenic attitude transmuted icy malice melted persistent night overcome
Dovina
10-Jan-06/10:58 AM
I agree. But a clever twist would be nice - maybe, A bright cloudy day, or somesuch.
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