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Sunlighting (Free verse) by ALChemy

Swallows announce the end of yesterday. The morning girl awakens to their song. Her crayola sunrise paints over the gray of fading night to dawn a bright sarong, a flower-sprinkled emerald dress that stretches to the horizon’s hem and ripples in a warm wind’s caress: A playground for the cherubim. “Oh, Uncle Moon, please play with me, while the day’s still shining bright?” “I’m so tired but I’ll try Sweetpea.” And the moon missed work that night.

ALChemy 10-Jan-06/10:17 AM
Me niether, I'm just an uncle with an adoring niece and nephew. It's pure opinion coming out of me so yes, truthfully in my life there is nothing more important. When you discover and I'm sure you soon will how amazingly an adoring child can change the worst day of your life to one of the best days it think you too will love the idea that there's an angel out there who calls you uncle or even some day dad. With that said, it's not the only meaning of life and if you're never an uncle or father or whatever that's OK too. There are plenty of other reasons to love life.




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