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light [edited] (Haiku) by lmp

yellow-pink rind fades next to morning light's luster upon your soft skin

<~> 10-Jan-06/9:04 AM
still, it's not a complete image, even if it is a lovely one. the hard-ass in me wants a complete image from my haiku.




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