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portrait of powerlessness (Free verse) by digipoet

i bleed draconian sorrow toes trembling fingers forgotten my heart screams to you and at you shame, secrecy, sadism

cyan9 10-Jan-06/1:28 AM
Didn't like ending on the word sadism, would have voted [8-9] if the last line was secrecy, sadism, shame




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