<~>9 Jan 2006

the wet trash can cross it but you cannot, do not.

in my heart twice in S1 does not seem intentional, and maybe should be an edit.

drop "just" from S3 L1; it's a filler word. nice linebreak at S3 L2

beautiful ending. love it that mirror sky subtextually tells me about the puddles, the melt in warming March.