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The Forgetting (Free verse) by Dovina

He stooped to smell a rose, the same he’d smelled all morning. Inner child not inner any more, he tasted everything new— delicious oblivion. Eternal pasteless now.

zodiac 5-Jan-06/10:00 AM
ZODIAC: ***PLAGIARY ALERT***

Dovina: Not so. I changed pastless to pasteless. It's an allusion.

ZODIAC: The title, central image, and 95% of the words aren't yours.

DOVINA: I'm an illusion.

ZODIAC: I don't have time for this. You've been warned. Again.




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