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light [edited] (Haiku) by lmp

yellow-pink rind fades next to morning light's luster upon your soft skin

lmp 5-Jan-06/8:44 AM
ok, i feel just a weeee bit foolish. (i take it you mean the first "the"?). yeah, it actually makes it 6-7-5, doesn't it?




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