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Bugs (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I don't mind so much when insects explode on my windshield. So colorful these small Picassos Thin green wings splay over a jealous yellow blur shimmery silver plays on a fluid blue signature. The way humans die is not so vivid. Slowly browning and wilting. Inside, a monochrome.

PoeticXTC 4-Jan-06/8:28 PM
Very descriptive, i love it. That 0 that Rockmage gave you was obviously flawed. There are blunt and clear assholes on this thing. I didn't mean to curse but sometimes it's called for. I loved you poem alot...




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