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The Forgetting (Free verse) by Dovina

He stooped to smell a rose, the same he’d smelled all morning. Inner child not inner any more, he tasted everything new— delicious oblivion. Eternal pasteless now.

Dovina 4-Jan-06/3:11 PM
I'm sorry then. Were you really serious about spelling tongue as "tounge" several times running?




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