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This Is Me (Free verse) by PoeticXTC

This is me, I`m one of a kind. Brown, chinky eyes not easy to define. Shoulder length hair dark-brown and blonde Soft lips that speak truth; my word is bond. Beauty, smooth skin touched by none. A bright smile that could melt the sun. Sexy, tight frame not to be mistakened This gift is made for one, others are foresakened. Ivory key like teeth in two straight rows strong, neat from a slight correction Legs, muscular, like track stars Body, Built to perfection. Strong, working hands, worked to the bone. Pencil thin fingers most prized possession owned. Soft, cushy, tushy never missed by eyes. Surrounded by thick, ham like thighs. Never can be broken, standing tall and strong They envy such definition, seems nothing`s wrong Everyones view from the outside in Wanting what they don`t have, Forgetting envy is sin.

PoeticXTC 4-Jan-06/10:10 AM
being worked to the born doesn't mean it has to be scarred or cut. Hardwork from playing sports all the time and working hard in school. Not like moving boulders with my bear hands. Don't be so ignorant. A nice tight frame is the body on the outside, the soft cushy part reps. the inside. Sometimes it isn't natural to complete or achieve perfection. but it's worth it to come as close to perfection as you feel you can. (perfection is in the eye of the beholder.)this was an assignment that I had to do awhile back. The description is the most important part.




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