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loved once (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Changing my mind once agian Slowly going, never stopping Rightfully you are to blame So mezmorizing so intense Brings shame to a man in love.

LilMsLadyPoet 3-Jan-06/8:47 PM
I don't get it.....seems too disconnected.
'again'>typo.
I take it you are afraid to commit...once bitten, twice shy thing here? It could have been more clear. Why the shame?




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