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when i met sky alone (Other) by Prince of Void

4:00 am inside.. scene of death the chilly breeze of dawn on the cold face of life when i met sky alone silence deserted .... and the poem has never been written .. [part one ]

elderking 2-Jan-06/2:28 PM
actually it wasn't the first line that caught my interest it was liine 2 & 3. . .both are keepers. The last line left me feeling like "what? is that all there is?"




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