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when i met sky alone (Other) by Prince of Void

4:00 am inside.. scene of death the chilly breeze of dawn on the cold face of life when i met sky alone silence deserted .... and the poem has never been written .. [part one ]

Dovina 30-Dec-05/1:10 PM
Line 2 is good.




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