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For Love of Baseball (Free verse) by Dovina

Baseball illiterate, unable to root except in following crowds like some poetic dunce It never scored with me how unlikely a homerun how loveable a team only as it mattered to him But he changed the game from play to real worthy of news a conflict of heroes a stage to learn from Not many get their strength from baseball not many from poetry but we who do head for the outfield alert, expecting to win

amanda_dcosta 30-Dec-05/12:42 AM
I have been reading his again and again and must sqay that this is good. I like the punch in the last para.




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