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Due Consideration (Free verse) by Dovina

An urgent whisper rises strained I hold it back hold breath Could it sound or only crack trying To restrain that unborn word might forfeit all To give voice, gain too much and what if that whisper isn’t ‘No’? After due consideration I ignore reason Better to take whatever pain release breath and thereby know

LilMsLadyPoet 13-Dec-05/9:30 AM
Crap...ignore the typos...that DO exist...I admit that much, since they are there, and they do exist. No amount of not admiting will make them not exist.




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