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Observer (Free verse) by Dovina

I observe a mind with facets watch its anger swell and dwindle see its joy flap high, then flounder inhale a smile while passions kindle Detached and free to lend critique I watch an actor come of age capture each new scene in wonder can’t wait to turn the page Through all, I do not tamper play moralist or God for that would cut my pleasure and make this poem a wad

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Dec-05/3:09 PM
I'm sure it's a pleasant feeling to divorce yourself from all responsibility. It's also the last thing this world needs. Condemnation. Punishment. Lowliness. Until you've grown up, that should be your motto. What possible good will come from shamelessly patting yourself on the back?




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