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almost missed work (Free verse) by calliope

rail; my head is softer gloomed like dimmer wheels through trainy trails. like arms about to lift before another drifts by quickly. i'm about as late to work as i have ever been, but seconds are quicker. and i clock in just as the minute hand softly swings like a defective ticker.

cyan9 6-Dec-05/2:50 AM
Cute, nothing more, nothing less... for that reason I dont particularly like this, but have had an enjoyable read, that I will forget quite quickly I am sad to say.




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